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My Captured Heart

50 words of you

By Simon AylwardPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
Runner-Up in Love in 50 Words Challenge
Photo by https://pixabay.com/users/omarmedinafilms-818453/

When you speak,

I breathe the vapoured hearts

that sweeten bitter air.

When you smile,

despair evaporates;

my lips begin to curl.

When you cry,

I yearn to catch your tears

and taste the salted cure.

When you leave

my heart is ruptured,

'til I see your face once more.

love poems

About the Creator

Simon Aylward

Undiscovered Irish Playwright and Poet - Seeker of eternal youth - Wannabe time traveller and believer in spiritual energies - Too many books to read, not enough time!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Miss Beyabout 7 hours ago

    What a beautiful poem, how lovely!โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ™โœจ๏ธ

  • Beautiful.

  • Susan Fourtanรฉ about a year ago

    Congratulations on your win! ๐ŸŽ‰ I told you it was seriously beautiful, didnโ€™t I! ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Susan Paytonabout a year ago

    I yearn to catch your tears and taste the salted cure. Absolutely beautiful. Nicely Done!! Congratulations on your win.

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a year ago

    Such rich, yearning work here, Simon! It evokes real feeling and beautiful, wispy imagery - congratulations on the well-deserved recognition! :)

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ

  • Tracy Kreuzburg about a year ago

    I really enjoyed this. My only suggestion is, for me, the word 'ruptured' isn't the right word here. I'm not sure what is, but it took me out of the poem when I read it. Congratulations!

  • G. A. Boteroabout a year ago

    Taste the salted cure. Love that. Congrats

  • Congratulations!

  • Beth Sarahabout a year ago

    Beautiful โœจ

  • Susan Fourtanรฉ about a year ago

    This is seriously beautiful and all in 50 words. Good luck in the challenge!

  • L.K. Rolanabout a year ago

    A gorgeous genuine-heartfelt love letter captured in 50 words. This is stunning and I hope to see it place in the challenge!

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    A true love poem, when you smile despair evaporates. Well Done!!!

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