When my heart wants more.
Yet your heart has grown stone cold.
Pray my tears will scar.
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Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge
UPDATE - Republished to update the list of entries, with the 40 we've had so far. Completely smashed last unofficial challenge which recieved 31 entries. And there is still time. If you have yet to enter and fancy winning a bit of money or just challenging yourself or both or just making two old geezers job harder - please enter!
By Paul Stewart2 days ago in Writers
Comments (4)
You really pack a lot of emotion into this one. Well done, Daphsam!
Oh, ouch! For you, but also the recipient of your knifey tears!
This was so poignant and emotional! Loved your Haiku!
This is good, but I prefer the previous inverse haiku you published (which was absolutely stellar).