I will watch for thee
for Dear John a Harper Lewis Rogue Challenge

Shining Achilles, no more shalt I wait for thee
to unstiffen thy neck and unbend mindless rage
Hector hath pinned us to the sea and yet thy pout
when thou alone might answer Hector blow for blow
I have loved thee since we were boys and Chiron taught
us together the art of war, to hunt and heal
to sing the virtues of honor and fellowship
thou were greater than Jason and Asclepius
casting the javelin further than any mortal
thy singing as pleasing as Phoebus Apollo's
in every art thou were like onto a god
and I, a fool humbled by thy gossamer grace
a poor shade o'erwhelmed by thy beauty and light
what pleasures must I forsake till honor awakes
the memory of arms wrapped tightly in embrace
our chests pressed skin to skin and thy lips tasting mine
I cannot watch thee like this lest love turn to hate
even if I ride thy chariot to my death
and plunge into the foul dark of Hades dread keep
the only lesson thy failed to master, I learned
when thou could not, to foretell all that lies in store
I know that I must die for thee to save the Greeks
perhaps thy helm and armor will confer brief fame
that I might unhorse even the godlike Hector
or drive my lance into mighty Sarpedon's breast.
...
I will watch for thee in Hades, thine, Patroclus.
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link to Harper's challenge:
a Harper Lewis rogue challenge

About the Creator
John Cox
Twisted writer of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Ain't got none of that.



Comments (5)
I had to read this twice once I realized what this was for. NAILED IT.
This was so beautiful. Loved your take on this challenge!
Ohhh, this is such a beautiful piece!
Wow, John, you’ve got the language to a t. So impressive!
Oh, this is beautiful! Well done!