Feel It.. Write It… Communicate It
It’s What We Do
Write from experience…
Write what you know
Let readers feel your pain
And revel in your glow
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Let them cry alongside you
When someone passed
Chuckle at your snickers
When someone passed gas
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Make it real… Make it tangible
So they hear the barn owl’s screech…
Smell the smoke of the campfire
Taste the salt of the beach
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Brush their cheek against soft swaddling
Feel your pride as you hold your newborn
Taste baby spit as finger enters mouth
Grimace as diaper becomes suddenly warm
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As new romance hits the horizon
Blaze with heat from passionate fire
When love requited be not scorned
Make readers burn with aching desire
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Let them see the sunrise
Feel the morning fog
Smell the opening rosebud
Hear crunch of leaves beneath mossy log
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Make readers cringe in disgust
As slime coated leeches crawl into a mouth
Or scream loudly in terror
As fangs and claws rend their way south
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Yes writers, this is your job
But if you can’t make readers
Laugh, cry, smile, frown, cringe, blush, or scream
Just feel it yourself… Only don’t mislead her

About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp



Comments (2)
Spot on!
Truth be Told, I Love Surreal Poetry❤️