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Weaponised Incompetence

For Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished 3 days ago 1 min read
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Tonya's two-week-old daughter was dead. She screamed at her husband.

"WHY DID YOU PUT HER INTO THE WASHING MACHINE AND TURN IT ON?"

"She vomited and I wanted to clean her up. You complain that I don't help but when I do, this is what I get!"
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  • Janis Masyk-Jacksonabout 2 hours ago

    Too funny! What a great blend of horror and humor.

  • Jennisea Standing Rockabout 12 hours ago

    holy cow. that was a dark snippet.

  • Julie Lacksonenabout 16 hours ago

    Holy cow! You came back with a vengeance. I'm so glad to see another piece by you!! Way to go. Hopefully, this is the first of many new ones. 💜

  • Gregory Paytonabout 20 hours ago

    I wanted to stop by and support you Dhar. This is scary. He won’t be worried about cleaning up an anymore. Do you think anyone would actually be that stupid.? Nice entry.-your crushing the challenge.

  • Well-wrought! The husband won't have to worry about cleaning up around the house anymore, as he'll be living in a much smaller cell soon enough...

  • "this is what I get!" hahahaha...I have this conversation about 3x a week.The best horror and satire is something that's so close to reality it could almost be true.

  • Fantastically horrific. Love it.😍

  • JBaz2 days ago

    Laugh, shock, laugh again. Mad I laughed. The Dharr touch works …..as I laugh once more.

  • Seema Patel2 days ago

    Unsettling. Seen so many crimes by fathers that somewhere it might be real.

  • Cristal S.2 days ago

    I used to have a favourite shampoo called 'Hair Food,' and the different scents had different fruit pics on the label. And then at some point, they added a big red 'DO NOT EAT' sticker on the cap. I always wondered what might have provoked that… Did someone actually think it was a smoothie or something? Common sense really isn't that common nowadays… You totally nailed the challenge, but I wouldn't have expected anything less from you, Dharr! Brilliant! 🧡

  • Kenny Penn2 days ago

    Okay, I literally laughed out loud. This is some dark ass humor!

  • Aspen Marie 2 days ago

    Gruesome!! Also… accurate. Weaponized incompetence indeed! I’d like to call you weaponized competence but it doesn’t quite reach the level of literary excellence I associate with you!

  • Oh my goodness I did not expect that Dharr! XD XD XD I guess now we know why some baby clothes have tags that say "remove baby before washing" XD XD

  • Colleen Walters2 days ago

    When you think that people have to have labels on things that tell them not to eat it or drink it, like Tide Pods and car batteries, this isn't that far-fetched! Totally unexpected lol and I hope it wins! 😁🧡💫✨

  • Gerry Thibeault2 days ago

    nicely done Dharrsheena!!!

  • Sandy Gillman2 days ago

    Wow! That was a short, but wild ride! Great work 😀

  • Luna Jordan3 days ago

    Well, holy shit. :D Good job.

  • Calvin London3 days ago

    Loved it Dharr. There is probably some male put there who is reading this and saying, "Seems like a good thing to do to me!"

  • Jamye Sharp3 days ago

    Very good. Read the rules for the challenge and this certainly should be a top contender for all the things about the situation said that are not written down.

  • I think you crushed the challenge! How horrible!!! Well done 👏

  • Rebecca Patton3 days ago

    Dang...the title definitely fits. Unless this was just a straight-up murder disguised as weaponized incompetence. This was a good, dark story. Great job!

  • Tiffany Gordon3 days ago

    Poor baby... Brilliant concept & writing Shee Shee!

  • Tori3 days ago

    Dang, that took a darkly humorous turn in a matter of seconds. Truly captures your title. Twisted, but not unfamiliar (the weaponized incompetence part :P). Nice!

  • Sam Spinelli3 days ago

    Hahaha damn. Love the combo of horror and dark humor 😂😂🤣 Weaponize incompetence is the perfect title for this :)

  • 🌼Oh my gosh! The queen of horror is back to get us. I don't need to say this was brilliant, but it truly was!

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